Strong like Banyan
THE POEM IS WRITTEN AS A PART OF SOCIAL CAUSE, TO SAY "STOP ASSAULTING GIRL CHILD, RESPECT HER.
Deep like Ocean
Beckoning
two arms
Rising
heart’s alarms
Surrender
in there
Love in air
Head on
them, did rest
Heavy, with
thoughts best
Enchanting, magnetic, moment
Those arms
into she went
Life’s
agony on a vent
Life it
meant.
Messenger
of love
Imitating the feathery dove
Those arms
checked her in
Breath
held, raised chin
Faint
smile, her ornament
Temptation
to gulp the moment
Possessive
embrace
….face to
face
Clock ticks on
Moment to
stick on
A Time
Life’s true Mime
Twelve, struck the clock
…...she
fled, off her time lock
Into her
world of cinders
Ella, dreams yet of wonders.
P.S. This poem sure seems romantic, nice. Sure has Cinderella as example. Who does not want to be a Cinderella, awaiting her prince charming? Yet, it's not rare to read about young brides bleeding to death these days, in news. They do not live to dream like Cinderella perhaps...........
THE POEM IS WRITTEN AS A PART OF SOCIAL CAUSE, TO SAY "STOP ASSAULTING GIRL CHILD, RESPECT HER.
Ref:
Ahh! Everyone has a dream, but one's should not interfere others'. Nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteI admire critics for their view points. Well, this interference part sounds interesting. I did not notice it myself. Gr8 observation.
Deletevery beautifully xpressed
ReplyDeleteHopefully to touch the cause....
DeleteNice composition. Amazing weave of words.
ReplyDeleteThey were supposed to be simple diction poem. The cause and the projection meant to me. Thanks.
DeleteGood one for a good cause
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DeleteExcellent poem.Only you could do this
ReplyDeleteThumbs up Sir.
DeleteI loved your poem, it was a pleasure reading and when social message is taken up by writers thats more good, thanx for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAppreciate
DeleteExcellent ,couldnt imagine better than this
ReplyDeleteGlad you think so.
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